The night when Angels fall
The night when Angels fall is the first interactive short-story written by Orlon Dogmann.
- It will have an accompanying Fiction in RoyalRoad, writen by me. I add this here as a proof of ownership, do not panic. -
The tale of a fearful night in Saint Maurice Chapel, during the most violent storm it had ever faced. When lightning hits and thunders roar, heroes rise to protect the rest of the innocent. But there are no heroes in here, nor innocents. Just little Gabrielle.
But she'll have to do.
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This game contains descriptions of violence, torture, discrimination and hatred. It also contains loud noises. Reader discression is adviced.
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Very good writing, engaging and interesting concept. The background noise really adds to the atmosphere of the game as well. The choices you can choose from are interesting, I don't know if they matter yet, but a very good prologue to the start of something more.
The only complaint I would give out right now would be the shifting perspective can be somewhat confusing in some sections of the story.
Thank you for this incredibly captivting and dark story!
please keep making more like this it’s really intriguing and interesting!
wow. just wow! i feel like you really managed to capture a feeling of dread and hope here. the sounds were perfectly timed. both of the kids felt real - especially considering their circumstances and their histories. i really really enjoyed this, thank you for sharing!